Don't be so hard on yourself! This looks lovely, drawing with highlighters is very hard and you have done a great job, the bright colours really make it stand out!

This is amazing, so creative and bizarre! But I looked at your description and I don't see a link to your work in progress, I just thought I'd mention this because if you wanted to enter Jazza's Challenge of the Month you had to include a link and I think you have a really good chance of doing well in it because of this unique idea!

This such an original idea! I've never seen anything like this before, the detail is remarkable considering you were carving on a leaf, as they're so delicate and not very big. Fantastic job on this!